Inspiring song! Great melody and lyrics.
I wish the lyrics had been tightened up.
You could have used the theme of "awakened" more consistently, so that every line is related to the theme of "opening one's eyes" and "... finally [to] realize" [something].
But, as they say in poker, "You left money on the table."
You could have make every line thematically consistent.
When a song has no consistent theme from verse to verse, or from line to line, the lyrics become cliche, and independent, and non-sequitur.
Most of the lines are good in this regard. But some lines started to skew off topic.
Thanks for your opinions!
I really enjoyed the song. Great job!
Nice, Aaron - dig the harmonies!
I like it a lot... Marvin
Thank you sir!
Nice job Aaron. Enjoyed listening to the new one. Nice production, Gary.
Thank you Dave!
Excellent production. I kept waiting for a David Gilmour guitar solo.
haha i could hear that too! We're going to do another mix with a guitar solo soon.
BEAUTIFUL Song! A breath of fresh air
Kind of reminds me of Badfinger
Nice. Now I'm going to go listen to some Badfinger. It's been awhile!
Awesome Aaron. Really like the chord progression "in the now, made it through some how..." parts! Well done to you and Gary, thanks for sharing, looking forward to hearing more
Very Nice Aaron. I enjoyed the layered vocals
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