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6/27/2017

22 Comments

"Awakened"

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22 Comments

Gary Gray link

6/27/2017 12:12:45 pm

Inspiring song! Great melody and lyrics.

Aaron Davison

6/27/2017 12:27:22 pm

Thanks Gary!

Kim Goldsworthy

6/27/2017 12:17:26 pm

I wish the lyrics had been tightened up.
You could have used the theme of "awakened" more consistently, so that every line is related to the theme of "opening one's eyes" and "... finally [to] realize" [something].
But, as they say in poker, "You left money on the table."
You could have make every line thematically consistent.
When a song has no consistent theme from verse to verse, or from line to line, the lyrics become cliche, and independent, and non-sequitur.
Most of the lines are good in this regard. But some lines started to skew off topic.

Aaron Davison

6/27/2017 12:28:22 pm

Thanks for your opinions!

Bob

6/27/2017 01:16:37 pm

I really enjoyed the song. Great job!

Aaron Davison

6/27/2017 09:25:10 pm

Thanks Bob!

Mike Baker link

6/27/2017 02:18:39 pm

Nice, Aaron - dig the harmonies!

Aaron Davison

6/27/2017 09:14:32 pm

Thanks Mike!

marvin floyd

6/27/2017 03:25:28 pm

I like it a lot... Marvin

Aaron Davison

6/27/2017 09:25:33 pm

Thank you sir!

Dave Marean link

6/27/2017 05:49:12 pm

Nice job Aaron. Enjoyed listening to the new one. Nice production, Gary.

Aaron Davison

6/27/2017 09:25:57 pm

Thanks Dave!

Gary Gray link

8/19/2017 01:59:11 am

Thank you Dave!

Gary McKinney

6/27/2017 06:15:57 pm

Excellent production. I kept waiting for a David Gilmour guitar solo.

Aaron Davison

6/27/2017 08:38:10 pm

haha i could hear that too! We're going to do another mix with a guitar solo soon.

RIDICULAS TRIXX link

6/27/2017 07:03:56 pm

BEAUTIFUL Song! A breath of fresh air

Aaron Davison

6/27/2017 09:17:56 pm

Thanks!

Keith Kehrer

6/27/2017 08:01:27 pm

Kind of reminds me of Badfinger

Aaron Davison

6/27/2017 09:26:45 pm

Nice. Now I'm going to go listen to some Badfinger. It's been awhile!

Keith Skooglund link

6/28/2017 01:57:35 pm

Awesome Aaron. Really like the chord progression "in the now, made it through some how..." parts! Well done to you and Gary, thanks for sharing, looking forward to hearing more

Beautiful song. The chorus could have a few more instruments like guitars to bring it more and add some punch. link

6/29/2017 05:25:37 pm

Roger Anthony Whiting link

7/2/2017 09:44:02 pm

Very Nice Aaron. I enjoyed the layered vocals

Hear my newest song!

"Awakened"

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